Score: 9

"Not many complaints.."

submission: Freedom.1

date: December 1, 2003

.. in fact, the only problem I have with it is that the voices are very grainy.

Score: 6

"About Fonts..."

submission: Count Vampula: Episode I

date: December 1, 2003

Generally it's acceptable to use 2 different fonts in any certain project: One Serif or gaudy font such as you have used already, and a san-serif, which is a font without any little flourishes. The Gaudy font should really only be used for Titles, and possibly subtitles, because if they're used for normal reading, they can be very hard to follow, which is the case in this flash. The font used for the dialogue here is somewhat hard to read, and the really gothic font you use at the beginning doesn't work at all when you're telling us about the next episode.

Also, "firmiliar" should be "familiar", "I've", not "i've". "You've losed your sword" could possibly be better worded as "You've LOST your sword"

Anyway, good luck with your flash, and I look forward to your next one. =)

Score: 9

"Malicious and yet...!"

submission: The True Story of Den

date: November 30, 2003

I had never heard about DEN before this flash, but it was such a well put together flash, that I felt compelled to look into it a bit more. Sure enough, sexual misconduct allegations etc. Who would have thought that would really happen in the real world? =)

Anyway, good job. Although the style wasn't original, the execution of that style was done very well. Make more flash!